Week 8 Comments and Feedback

The comments from my classmates on my blogs have been extremely in depth and very helpful. I think that everyone in the class is really trying to help each other better their stories. When I give feedback to my classmates, I try to give as many helpful comments as possible. I use the same format for a lot of my comments and tailor them to each individual story I read. I enjoy reading and commenting on the other students' introductions because I think it is fun to get to know them even though we are in an online class.

Feedback: Cheezburger
I chose this image because I think feedback is important to the growth of a person both individually and academically.

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